Be completely honest when critiquing this poem?

I think its pretty good! kudos! A title i would suggest something like " open your ears" or " music in the night" something that is generally in the poem. I believe what your trying to convey is about joining together as a community for something that everyone enjoys to look at and watch but its suddenly different and every ones waiting for it to be right again. That's just my own interpretation and opinion as they say " every ones got one" . please let us know after the question is over what your message is to anyone reading this. Im very interested.